Here is a model composition suitable for Primary 3 - "Friendship." Below you will find an essay (DRAFT 2) written by one of our students. Our students go through multiple drafts. What you will find in this blogpost is the improved final draft of the composition. Friendship
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Model composition: Friendship (Primary 3)
Student: Chin Pin Yuan, P3 (Improved version)
Pictures given: Sharing an umbrella
Model composition: Friendship (Primary 3)
Chin Pin Yuan, Chongfu Primary
Student: Chin Pin Yuan
Picture used: Sharing an umbrella
I never liked Sam. He was born with a silver spoon in his mouth and his father drove the most luxurious car. No one dared to talk to him as we thought we are peasants to him. I was expecting that my impression on him would never change but little did I know a friendship was going to develop.
After school, I had an important online class. I rummaged in my bag for my umbrella as it was raining heavily. For a moment, I thought I left it at home. My face turned as white as a ghost. I tried to remember where I had last seen it. Nevertheless, I realised I had to stay at school till the rain stopped.
Then, someone patted my shoulder. I slowly turned around and saw Sam looking at me. He asked me what was the problem. I told him I had an important online class and I forgot to bring an umbrella. After hearing what I said, he offered to share his umbrella with me. Despite being a wallflower, I accepted it. I smiled shyly in gratitude.
In the end, my impression on Sam changed and a friendship blossomed. I learnt to never judge a book by its cover and to instead understand people better. This lesson will be forever etched in the deep recesses of my mind.
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