Model composition secondary school - descriptive essay - "Describe a place that you enjoy going to on a regular basis and the people you meet there." Below you will find an essay (DRAFT 2) written by one of our students. Our students go through multiple drafts. What you will find in this blogpost is the improved final draft of the composition. Model composition: Descriptive Essay (example)
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Model composition secondary school - descriptive essay
Describe a place that you enjoy going to on a regular basis and the people you meet there
Student: Iman Zul, Secondary 1 (Improved version)
A moderately-sized stall is 0always filled to the brim from the time of the rising sun to the wee hours of the night. This prata shop never fails to brighten my day. Its environment is like a beacon in the dark,as if it were a safe place to rest. Saffrons at Swan Lake has a rich environment that relies on its customers and workers. I personally prefer it when it is empty with one or two people when the moon has risen. That way, I can pick a certain spot near the entrance and enjoy my delicious food while staring into the night sky.
Speaking of food, they have so many of my comfort foods, but I normally opt for their cheese prata because of its chewy deliciousness thanks to their already sumptuous and mouth-watering dough paired with excellent, unique cooking techniques practiced for years. It never fails to make my day.To be honest, there are many other fantastic prata stalls or shops near me, but Saffrons stands out from them with their excellent service. Being a regular customer, they never fail to put in the extra work for me, sometimes giving me extra paratha.
They also have hilarious rhymes on the back of their shirts, like Life is so Dhaal without you" and things like that. Being an Indian-style restaurant, their jokes are mainly based on the off-Indian dishes they sell. All in all, Saffron holds a special place in my heart, as I have been there countless times. I have tried countless prata stalls, but nothing hits the spot like Saffrons.
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