Here is a model composition suitable for Primary 2 - "Food poisoning." Below you will find an essay (DRAFT 2) written by one of our students. Our students go through multiple drafts. What you will find in this blogpost is the improved final draft of the composition. Model composition: Food poisoning (example)
Enrol in our Online / On-site English Composition Creative Writing classes. Click on the button below to get 1 TRIAL LESSON at a discounted price!
Model composition Food poisoning
Student: Ian Ang, P2 (Improved version)
Pictures given: 4 picture panel composition
Model compositions primary 2 English: Food poisoning
Model compositions primary 2 English: Food poisoning
The sky was azure blue, and the clouds were like cotton candy. I was in the canteen. I was with my friend, Barney. I found a scrumptious cupcake in my bag. Barney warned me to check the expiration date. But his warning fell on deaf ears, as I was feeling as hungry as a wolf. I wolfed down the cupcake, but it tasted strange. I turned up my nose and stuck out my tongue. Little did I know that consuming the cake was a bad idea.
At first, everything was okay. I was in class. Then, I started to feel nauseous, and my stomach started to have a gnawing pain. My face turned sickly green. I clutched my tummy. My teacher arched her eyebrows. I asked for my teacher’s permission to go to the toilet, but she refused.
Then I vomitted in class. Everyone was shocked. Their jaws dropped, and their eyes popped open. I gave a sheepish smile, and my cheeks turned beet red.The doctor said I had food poisoning because I ate contaminated food. The doctor advised me to always check the expiration date. Health is wealth.
Kommentare